written at 12:17 p.m. on 2003-03-01 dear cynthia:thoughts arrive like butterflies Layout - 13% It's quite pretty, neat, tidy and is self designed. I like the little image of the butterfly. I don't like the background colour of the text box though. I don't think the layout quites suits you. From reading your diary I sensed a lot of inner confusion, yet this layout implies peace and certainty. Content - 30% You write very well and keep the reader entertained. I love the way you were so nonchalant about the speeding ticket, and I liked this entry. The entries where you despair or talk to yourself are quite touching. You just read like a real person, not trying to impress but just writing what you feel, which is admirable. Your 101 page is not boring like others, it's a good read, though occasionally contradictory. Navigation - 5% Easy, down both sides Errors - 10% None that I could find. Contact - 5% book, notes, email, aim Commitment - 3% few gaps here and there Extras - 5% reviews, quizzes, rings, surveys, wishlist Total - 71% Quote - I don't think I've given up. I'm just squirming a lot in some very tight space. Comments - A good diary. I don't think I'll hurry back, but it was an enjoyable review.
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