written at 12:14 p.m. on 2003-03-08 Divinity in Motion | Version 5 | The Freedom of the Mind Layout - 18% Awww Anne Frank. I don't know how many times I have read her diary and she still makes me cry. I like the way you have a series of nine pictures instead of just one large one. It makes your diary a bit different. I'm not sure if I like the pink colour of the text. I understand that you had to inject some colour into the page, but it seems a little harsh. Maybe a blue or a lighter pink may look a little less severe? As it is, it's all very neat, tidy and workable. Self designed. Content - 50% The first entry I read was on your opinions on Iraq. I decided that I'd probably like you straight away, since your layout endeared you to me immediately and I agree with what you have written about Saddam. You made me laugh with this sentence, 'I do think that Saddam Hussein should move out because he's a dictator and not really much of a gentleman...'. But even with the humour you made some serious points and were quite emotional about them. You said in your disclaimer that you rarely write about your emotions. I found that you were the opposite. I really got an insight into your personality and enjoyed reading into your mind. You seem to think the same way about people as I do. I hated the bitchy girls at school, the ones who never looked past their shallow lives. I sense intelligence in you which makes you want to read more. I also agreed with this entry and many others besides. In fact I could just link every one of your entries because they are all that good, but that would be silly wouldn't it? Navigation - 5% Easy, all in sections Errors - 5% None that I could find Contact - 5% email, form, guestbook, tagboard Commitment - 4% Almost daily Extras - 5% I wish I couild give you more than 5% for extras. I love sites with lots of extras! WOW Factor - 5% Definitely the layout. I love Anne Frank's diary. Combined with your intelligence and natural ability to write, your whole diary is a WOW factor! Total - 97% Quote - 'I wish I was funny, and could write funny things. Things that make people laugh, and maybe even fall of their chair.' Comments - I'm having luck at the moment with so many good diaries to review. Yours is at the top of the list. Well done.
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