written at 2:19 p.m. on 2003-01-13

faeriexgirl

*this*isnt*happening* ft. conor oberst

Layout - 15%

It's self designed and very neat and organised, which is cool. The only criticsm I would have of it is that it is very dark, but then if you like black, there's not much you can do about that.

Content - 25%

You seem much more negative about things than the last time I read you. I don't know if you are going through a general down patch, but I hope you feel better soon. You wrte very fluently, and thoughts seem to come out of honestly but there is not enough of them. You can't get to know someone through one line entries. I'm not really sure I gained much knowledge of you from reading the entries I did.

Navigation - 5%

Easy, all at the bottom

Errors - 10%

None that I could find.

Contact - 5%

book, AIM, email, notes

Commitment - 4%

quite good

Extras - 5%

Too many to list

Total - 69%

Quote - i love the way i pretend i dont give a shit, when i give all my shit.

Comments - I thought your diary was better when I first read it. I appreciate that at the moment you are busy in real life but it has reflected in your diary.


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