written at 8:19 p.m. on 2003-03-23
%%diary-lovelydecay%% shattered into a million pieces Layout - 10% I'm not really sure about it. I like the picture, but I think the overall page lacks something - colour! If you're a fan of white then it's great but I think the picture could be used to greater effect if it was centred and the links shifted to the bottom or side. Not my cup of tea. What am I talking about, I don't even like tea. Content - 30% Your entries are certainly emotive, and generally stir up emotion in the reader also. You write very well and descriptively. The criticism I would have is that you don't explain things fully. What was in the letter to Janet? Why was she angry? What? huh? It's not often that I have to say to include more of what actually goes on in your life, but I think it would give the reader a more rounded impression of you. I was surprised when I found out your age, you definitely seem more mature, and I agreed with your sentiments about putting people in categories. Navigation - 5% All next to the pic. Errors - 5% None that I could find Contact - 5% email, book, notes Commitment - 5% Almost daily Extras - 4% about, cast, rings, surveys WOW Factor - 3% Your way of expressing yourself Total - 67% Quote - Watching the Brave Little Toaster and bawling. Comments - A diary that seems to be a place to vent, which is fine, but needs more to be a rounded representation of you reviewed by kym
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