written at 3:06 p.m. on 2003-05-21

miraz

colossal Mexican

Layout - 10%

Design by lissy. Well it's techinically sound, but I really don't like green. Eck. Especially bright green against a black background. Really isn't good on the eyes. But it works in both resolutions and netscape.

Content - 30%

You write a lot about your friends and how they influence your life, whch is fine. My friends are a huge part of my life too. I would suggest that you include a 'cast' page so we know who you're talking about and in what context. I like the way you have incorporated horoscopes into your entries. I like that kind of stuff myself. Your entries are essentially okay, but you have to know a lot abut you and your friends to really get them.

Navigation - 5%

Easy, at top and bottom.

Errors - 5%

Please capitalize. All your links work.

Contact - 5%

book, mail, im, map

Commitment - 5%

Daily, or nearasdamnit

Extras - 4%

quotes, links, bio, glossary

WOW Factor - 2%

The length of your entries! Wow!

Total - 66%

Quote - lately everything i write for school comes out awkward and like it was written by my little brother

Comments - Sorry this took so long!


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