written at 4:08 a.m. on 2002-12-07 The Nightmare Before Christmas Layout - 18% I like this. It's well set out, I like the image and it's from Disney. Bonus! It is also self designed, which deserves kudos. Black without being overly depressing. But I have to say I had issues with your font. After a while it felt like my eyes were moving closer together! Content - 40% You write about day to day stuff. Which I refuse to penalize people for, since recording events is the whole point of a diary.Overall I enjoyed reading it. One thing I would suggest is that you flesh out your cast list a little. Rather than just listing their names, I would like to know a bit about them, but other than that your diary is fine. I'm amused by 'the Boy'. It reminds me of the lastseason of ally McBeal, where she has a crush on 'the Boy'. So, yeah, you made me laugh. In your latest entry you are talking about copyright. Technically you should be okay if you credit work and provide a disclaimer. Most of which I don't do on my designs. Oops. Navigation - 5% All at the top Errors - 10% None that I could find. And I'm persnicity. Contact - 5% Book, notes, email Commitment - 5% Almost daily Extras - 5% Bio, Cast, Rings, Links, Quizzes etc Total - 88% Quote - How does a person get into the Christmas spirit? Comments - Good diary. May return
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