written at 11:30 p.m. on 2002-11-23 Layout - 13% Designed by pixie designs. I'm personally not keen on it. I just don't like green, and you can't read the blue writing very well, but I like the picture and it doesn't hurt my eyes to look at it. Reading the entries, the slogan on your design relates to the theme of your entries really well. Content - 40% First of all, well done for calling that girl who called you a dork in the shop a bitch. Just what I would have done. I also don't understand the phrase african-american. If I was phrased in that way I would be Scottish-Irish-English. Strange. You write in a very enthusiastic way, with exclamation marks and all, which is a pleasant change. You have happy entries, as well as sad. You write in flippant comments which are sometimes funny and sometimes frustrating as you want to know what lies behind them. Overall, your entries did not bore me, but I didn't feel like I got to know you all that well. You seem like you have loads going on in your brain, but only write a bit of it down. But that makes you want to come back and find out more. Navigation - 5% All at the bottom, easy peasy. Errors - 5% A few spelling errors. Girl, sort your reviews page out! You need some semblance of order in there! Contact - 5% book, notes, email, tag, map Commitment - 5% Every day! With multiples! Extras - 5% Geography, stories, rings, reviews Total - 78% Quote - I went shopping and got some lotions to soothe my soul.I could use it. Comments - Good read, I'd come back
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