written at 2:30 a.m. on 2003-02-14 The Story of an Invisible Fairy Layout - 13% Er, essentially it's a great idea. I'm just not too happy with the text box being on top of the picture. I just don't see much point in not being able to see the picture and not being able to see the writing properly. But I do like the picture, and the colours and everything else. It's just that one thing. Content - 25% I couldn't really get into it. You spoke about school and swimming an awful lot. I hate college and I can't swim so unfortunately I cant appreciate those subjects. The real issue I had with your content is that you wrote all factual information, rather than recording your feelings or thoughts as such. I never got a sense of you being happy or sad, it's just monotonous. Navigation - 5% Easy, all at the bottom. Errors - 10% None that I could find Contact - 5% Book, email, notes, AIM Commitment - 3% often Extras - 5% rings, templates, quotes, 101 things, links, reviews Total - 66% Quote - I think there are just some people that you just see, hear, and just immediately know, with no question, that they are beautiful Comments - I think you would have a great diary if you put more of yourself into it.
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