written at 12:52 p.m. on 2002-11-20 Layout - 15% I like the pictures, they are very individual and the way your diary is set out is easily accessible and easy to read. You have a lot of information there. You appear to have designed it yourself, which definitely deserves some kudos. Good job. You should change the layout of your archive page to match it. Content - 30% Firstly you made the cardinal sin. You spell everything wrong on purpose. I hate that. Or should I say dat. The reasoning behind this is that the text doesn't flow properly, it makes your diary harder to read, and in my opinion just looks silly. Also you could paragraph your writing more, it looks too bulky. On the upside, you write lengthy entries, which are fairly engaging, sometimes accompanied by little pictures (I especially liked the little doll witch on the broom) which makes the read more inviting. Navigation - 5% All down one side and you have loads of links there without making it look cluttered! Errors - 10% You buddy list link took me to my buddy list! Except for that no problem...and that is a whole lot of links! Contact - 5% Email, notes, guestbook Commitment - 4% Not everyday, but often enough Extras - 5% Way too many to list. Well Done. Total - 64% Comments - 10% deducted because I couldn't find a link back to me at time of review.
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