written at 10:29 p.m. on 2003-06-28
%%diary-tawnyraccoon%% .....footprints..... Layout - 10% Made by lissy. It's okay and cute I suppose, but I've seen it quite a lot before. You have the evil of all evils on your diary - a tagboard. I absolutely hate them and think they make any diary look ugly. If you must have one couldn't it go on a seperate page? Content - 25% Your entries didnt grip me that much. I don't know whether it was the light grey font or the fact that I was just flitting through them, but I didn't read as many entries as I'd originally set out to. It's possibly because you discuss school quite a lot, and your grades and stuff. Obviously these things are important to you, but a break down of every grade can get quite tiresome. Your entries are also littered with snippets of conversation and quizzes, which can help if used sparingly, but here made the flow of the diary a little bitty. Navigation - 5% all links at the top Errors - 2% Your cast page and name game link goes to the error page. You have lots of broken image links on your reviews page. Contact - 3% notes, book Commitment - 3% not daily but kinda regularly Extras - 5% webpage, rings, cast, palm and mental state (which I liked) and more. WOW Factor - 3% You have your own webpage - that's really cool. Total - 56% Quote - 'I wish guys would be more picky' Comments - This diary has a lot of potential if you gave more to it.
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