written at 4:00 p.m. on 2003-05-28
%%diary-wyllow%% Babbles of a Gemini Layout - 15% It's been self designed, which definitely owes you some kudos. It's just a little jam packed for my taste. It's really good for your first layout, hell mine was much worse! You've got a great picture, but it's just shoved in a corner when it should be made a focal point of the layout, perhaps by being centred at the top. Everything on the page just seems a little busy as you have lots of clutter. I don't want tp go all IKEA on you, but I HATE tagboards - especially if they aren't on a separate page. They ugly up the best layouts. Your links are in little tables, which is great as it provides a more organised look. I would suggest losing all the extra buttons and crap and shoving them on a seperate page. It would make the look neater. I'm not slagging your layout here, I love the colours (the purple especially) and you definitely have more points than those using a template. Content - 40% It is evident from reading that you care deeply about other people. Your personality really shines through and you seem ike a lovely person. You don't just write about day to day stuff, you include emotion and random ramblings which defintiely make your diary a good read. The way you phrase your words is well chosen - you sound intelligent and communicate with honesty and with clarity. Navigation - 5% In drop down menus. Errors - 3% A couple of spelling mistakes, but nothing spectacular. Contact - 5% map, email, notes, book, tag Commitment - 4% not daily, but plenty of multiples. Extras - 5% more than 5% worth WOW Factor - 5% The effort you've put into your diary Total - 82% Quote - Come on KWP you became family, and family you never get rid of. There may be breaks but they are always there. Comments - Go you. Sorry this took so long!
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